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Review:HarrietHopkirk says:
Aaah! Marina! Happy birthday to you.

You know how much I love your writing. Like... so much. It's like totally fetch and awesome. Let's hope you don't lose all your talent just because you're super old and that.

I love how your description flows - it works so well that I can picture everything: Helena's father's study, Helena's emotions, her relationship with Rowena. You've really got a way with words. The balance between over describing and under describing is perfect, and you're able to give the reader the perfect amount of backstory - enough to allow mystery but give us enough to actually understand what is going on.

I love your characterisation of Helena - it is really perfect! How she switched from giving knowledge to simply teaching her daughter to sew and stuff really sets up for Helena's estrangement from her mother. Helena wants to rebel - hence the stealing of her mother's diadem. Your dialogue is also spectacular and really in character really believable and naturalistic!

GAAAH I LOVE THE CHARACTERISATIONS AND THE WORDS AND EVERYTHING!

EEE MARINA!!!

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