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Review:Atomic says:
Hi there, it's Atomic from the forums with your requested review!! I am so, so sorry that it took me this long to get back to you. College has been overwhelming lately. I would also like you to know that I actually wrote out a wonderful and long review, and in my tired stupidity closed the page before hitting submit (stupid preview button) so this is take two and I hope I do you justice.

I have no idea why you are editing this story, because it is absolutely marvelous. Your writing is superb and I think the plot is very original and believable. Your imagery and description in the story was so vivid that I could perfectly feel the love Helena and Edmund held for each other, and I actually cried at the very end. It didn't matter that I knew it was coming, you completely drew me into the story and it was heart breaking.

I did notice one tiny little thing. Your sentence: "She rolled onto her stomach and played with her fingers, tucking her crazed curls behind her ears" seems a bit strange to me. I think you meant to say that she played with her hair, but maybe that's just me being tired and stupid. Again, I'm so sorry. I had such a lovely review written for you and then I only hit preview.

As for Helena, she was absolutely wonderful. I think you definitely nailed her character. I could feel the internal struggle she faced between doing what her mother wanted her to do, and being the person she wanted to be. It was very well done and very realistic. I might maybe say that she gave into Edmund's request of running away a touch too quick, but that's really only if you want to get very picky. I think you did a marvelous job with her. She really was beautifully written.

But seriously, I am so glad you requested for me to read this story. It was original and wonderful, and you are a superb writer. I definitely give it a 10/10. Always feel free to request! I'd love to read anything else you've written.

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