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Review:Remus says:
Hey! Its Perelandra from the forums here with your review!

I have to say, I've never read a Phineas Black story and I'm glad that it was yours that I read first. Its full of detail and the description of it is fantastic. I really don't know what else to say aside from the fact that this is very, VERY well written. Grammar seems fine, your dialogue is perfect...the one small thing is that your spacing between paragraphs sometimes is off. But that's about it.

I absolutely like how you compare his imprisonment to Sirius' and how, in reality, his was better since he could still travel compared to Sirius.

Keep writing!

Author's Response: hey!!

Thank you so much for your wonderful review!! It really made my day :)

I was worried I hadn't written it quite well but I'm glad you found it good! Thanks for pointing out the details. The spacing - I'll fix it, it does get messed up sometimes!!

Thanks a lot once again!

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