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Review:marissa lily potter says:
Hey there, marissa lily potter here with the review you requested.

I have never read such an emotion filled, capturing and well written story before in my life. I absolutely love one-shots but I feel as though this one went on forever and by the ending, as if I had been through what Helena had been through with her, as it is the case with chaptered stories.

The details were to die for. You are an expert at using imagery and descriptions. You started the story off very well and the ending was just as great. It filled me with happiness when they were happy and sorrow when they were upset.

Helena's character was very much believable. I loved her personality. Her pride and arrogance, but her loyalty and kindness. They were complete opposites, yet they worked out so well for her! Helena was truly how she was described. You kept her characterization pure.

This was a very great story! I loved reading it and I could read it forever. There was mystery in every word and every paragraph captured me. It was as if I was feeling the emotions and living the lives of Helena and Edmund with them.

You're a very talented writer! The grammar, punctuation, imagery, and just about everything else was perfect! Amazing work with the story! I very much enjoyed reading it. I thought the idea, as common as it is with Founders Era fics, was very well written and thought out! I adored the plot as well :)

-marissa lily potter

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