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Review:ginnypotter242 says:
Oh wow. That was really good. The flow of this was great, I wanted to keep reading. The cliffhanger at the end is good too, it doesn't seem to just end, but it leaves you wanting more. Your writing is good, I loved the descriptions.

There weren't many things wrong, a few grammar and spelling errors, but nothing to distracting. The dialouge between Scorpius and Albus confused me a little-it wasn't entirely clear to me what Scorp had done until Dom confronted him. But that may just be me.

This seems like a really intersting story, and I'd love to see where it goes. You're off to a great start.

~Sara (puppyluv242)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!:D I plan to write more, but the next thing I'm submitting to the quere is Chapter 20 of Unforgiven because I've been keeping people waiting on it for a while! lol:D

I'm not very good at spotting those things! Things for pointing it out to me(:

I'm sorry it was confusing:/ I'll work on that:)

I'm glad it's entertaining, and I promise to do my part of the review swap as soon as I can:D

I'm glad you liked it:D

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