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Review:marinahill says:
I really enjoyed this :) You give Molly a really unique voice - all her observations are really witty and funny, and she says some hilarious stuff!

"Err... I was attacked by an, err, a rogue pygmy puff!" - I laughed so hard at this, because she seems to be the sort of person who makes up a load of rubbish under pressure, and it was really funny!

You've set up a great office dynamic already, which is actually really hard to do. I hate writing office scenes because I find that they drag, but you really made it come alive. I think Molly's inner ramblings really made this amusing.

Great work!

Marina

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And i'm also glad molly's voice was unique. I was a little bit worried that it was a bit to next-gen-fic-cliche. And I am SERIOUSLY proud you think it was witty!
That was, most definitely my favourite line. And i'm super glad it wasn't only me who liked that line, because sometimes I have a weird sense of humour.
Now that is my most proud thing. Because i don't even work in an office. So setting up an office dynamic is a bit clever of me, if i do say so myself *Is super chuffed* I shall just have to hang out at my father's work, and see what i hear ;)
Thanks so much!
Charlie
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