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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hello :)

Ooh, quite intriguing! You've left us with a little mystery, making me want to know so much more about her life, and more about exactly why she's in such a situation and how she got there. I also really like how it's about Molly Weasley - a character we don't often see as much. And I like Scorpius, and your different characterisation of him!

I would love some more description in following chapters, as this was packed with dialogue, but it was nicely written, and did capture my attention. Aww I liked Molly's attempt at an excuse - "attacked by a rogue pygmy puff" and "refusius maximus disorder" haha. Lovely first chapter so far :)

- charlotte

Author's Response: Hi!
OOh, intigueing is a good word, i'm glad i'm being intrigueing :D I think i chose Molly because we don't see much of her, also because she's more plausible for my plotline, though xD

I reckon it'll be one or two chapters before the description gets down; I am trying to tell it as strongly from Molly's POV as possible, and because she knows the ministry and that, she isn't really thinking about it. However, when she get's to where she's going, she'll be thinking about it more, so there'll be more description.
Is it big headed of me to say i rather liked that excuse as well? It was my best bit, which is probably why i made the reference to it in the chappie description. xD I'm soo glad you liked it!
*Ends rambling response*

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