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Review:Jet LaBarge says:
Mom of (two perfectly behaved) twins,
Love your sense of humor!
I thought Roxanne and Hilarion were an unlikely pair, and that Roxanne needed a reality check, but Hilarion and Lucy caught me by surprise. And Hilarion is growing on me as well. He is not as dumb as he thinks he is, just quiet and a little out of place with both Perry and his friends and the overconfident "jocks" that I am sure are plentiful in the Quidditch world.

I'd love to see how Percy and Audrey are dealing with Molly! I would expect that they are much more comfortable with quiet shy Lucy than with the character you portray Molly as being.

Thanks for the smiles.

Jet LaBarge

Author's Response: Ah, Molly. Well, she is a successful Quidditch player, and she was a prefect and Head Girl, so Percy would probably overlook a bit of mohawks and low-cut leather vests out of her. After all, he seemed to get along well with his brother Bill, who is similarly "cool" but also successful in the same way. Audrey, I think she'll be the softer, kinder half of that couple, so she would be more accepting of Molly's quirks.

Hilarion is probably not as dumb as he thinks, he just isn't a book-smart type at all, and isn't interested in being one, and he's also not very well-spoken or confident. Hufflepuff in a lot of ways - he's just a nice guy, that's all. He needs someone to help him loosen up a bit and be more confident. Roxanne does need a reality check, doesn't she?

Thank you so much for reviewing!


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