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Review:Noblevyne says:
Excellent chapter, the introduction to Guinevere was very well done and the language...while awkward and stilted against Albus' modern English, is also well done. Am I to guess by her choice of colours, she's...a little bit Slytherin?

And in this universe, does Merlin exist or is he just a story like Arthur and Guinevere? Or perhaps the story is historical in this instance?

Author's Response: Thank you. ^.^
I have to admit, I spent hours trying to get the right amount on her dialogue. Because while Old English is something I'm pretty good at, I didn't want to add too much and make it a pain to read, or too little and it seem out of place.

Yup, she's a total Slytherin. I used the colour choices to kind of get everyone in that mind set already, but she proves herself one soon. :)

Well I consider Merlin, Arthur and Guinevere legends in the sense of "no one quite knows the real story". Kind of the way they are now, but the wizarding community would have a more close connection, believe that they were real more than we do. I like to think Albus sees them all as historical, but skewed. I hope that makes sense...
(Like if in 500 years, someone told the story of Obama becoming President and said he had laser-vision too.)

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I was starting to consider dropping this story because it didn't seem like anyone was reading. Now I'm inspired all over again! --Jenna

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