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Review:Singularity says:
I love Harry and Ginny :* They're just so lovely together.

A couple of things that stood out to me in this chapter:
- About halfway through, Ginny has a line that says “And now you’ve come back. Excepting forgiveness,” I think that 'Excepting' should be 'Expecting'. Probably just a typo (I'm kind of in tune with them because I make so many :P)
- Harry last line confused me slightly. The way it's written, it kind of sounds like Harry is accepting Ginny's kiss as an apology, when it's Harry who is apologizing. (Does that make sense?) Maybe you could could change it to "Can I take that as apology accepted then?" It could just be me though. I'm a bit sleepy at the moment :P

I think you have a really nice start to your collection here. Best of luck with finishing it! And thanks again for entering my challenge!

~Singularity

Author's Response: Harry/Ginny, Rose/Scorp, Andromeda/Tonks, Ron/Hermione - my favorite ships!

Ooooh thanks for pointing that typo and I'll definitely reword that line. I can see how that cold be confusing.Thanks for awarding me honorable mention! :D


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