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Review:kaileena_sands says:
Oh god, this is such a beautiful one-shot! I came here for the review battle and I picked it, but I think I'll now have to read your full other story!

It's just so lovely and sad at the same time. You made me instantly connect with Lisa and feel for her. It must be so so sad for her to watch the person one loves being so unbelievably in love with someone else like James was with Lily. :(

Your writing suited the feeling of the story really well, too - it gives out both melancholy and at times the short phrases give out Lisa's feelings and excitement. And the quotes you picked for the fic suit it greatly too - I've never heard the one about hope being a universal liar and it fits Lisa's situation perfectly! Poor thing indeed!

All in all, I thoroughly enjoyed this! From this short one-shot, you really made me like Lisa and I'll definitely return to read the rest of her story in your other fic.

Author's Response: Aww...thank you! I'm glad you found it so! :)

Yes, it's incredibly sad- and let me let you on in a little secret (sort of). I wrote this when I myself was feeling very melancholy; so it all came out quite easily. I'm a very melodramatic person and the fic suited my mood :P

I stumbled upon that quote, and found it perfect for the story! Glad you thought so too!

Thanks, thanks, thanks for the lovely review! It seriously made my day! I'm sincerely glad you enjoyed it! :)

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