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Review:Pen2Paper says:
Hey SlytherinChica08 :)

Nice to finally read a story from you :) You requested on my review thread eons ago and I haven't been able to get it done till now. It's shamefull really how long it's taken me, :( I bet you don't even remember requesting.

Anyhow I just wanted to say I enjoyed this chapter. It was greatly refreshing to see Sirius as flustered, nervous, tender and vulnerable than the over-confident play boy we are so accustomed to in stories. You can clearly feel the dynamic of the group and his deep association with the rest of the marauders.

Lily I thought had a bit of an overreaction to James asking her out but it is quite canon so that's no biggie. I really liked it and i hope there's more coming. It was definitely interesting getting inside Sirius's head and finding out what made him the arrogant flirt that people perceive him to be.

Well done! Hope you continue with this story :)

Author's Response: Hey I'm really glad you enjoyed this! Sad to say its just a oneshot but I'm glad that you liked the look into Sirius's mind. Also I'm glad that you were able to feel the dynamic of the whole group in this oneshot as well!Thank you so much for the review!


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