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Review:Phoenix_Flames says:
Hello there! I'm back for the second chapter as requested. :)

And what a great chapter it was. This was really a wonderful chapter. You kept the tone of the story the same, keeping that wonderful sense of mystery. You really went about it all perfectly. Absolutely brilliantly.

Some questions were beginning to be anwered, that much I could tell. But you did it perfectly. While answering some of my queries, you only created more in this awesome way that made it all the more compelling.

You've kept so much up in the air thus far with your plot. You have me dying to know what is truly going on here. Well done, and you did an awesome job answering our queries. The flow of this chapter was awesome. The dialogue went with it perfectly, holding a sense of worry for the entire situation and yet still vague enough with the comments of the Weasleys and Lupin etc. for us to still wonder just what is going on.

You have an awesome mystery here. I can't wait to find out what's going on.

The descriptions of the Weasleys and Lupin I think are perfect. They seem very in canon and you are developing Missy's character very well. I can't wait to learn more about her. :)

Great flow, grew piecing together of the story. Just great job overall.

And that last bit with the egg yoke. That was quite clever and was just another aspect that made me wonder about what's going on. It made me wonder if this girl is Hermione, but I know better. I couldn't be; everyone would have reacted at her appearance. So then why are they acting so similarly? Gah! Such a brilliant little twist to the plot that you threw in there. :)

I passed a few grammar mistakes, just misplaced commas I believe. So nothing big and nothing to worry about. That's all so easy to overlook. Great job! :)

Thanks for coming to request again! I'm sorry this review was shorter and a little vague. I gave this review from my phone because my laptop crashed, but I still hope that you found it useful. :)

Feel free to come request again! Thanks! :) And wonderful job.

Author's Response: hehehehe, thank you but you did the wrong story :D thank you though for your kind words to this story. i think it needs it since i heave plenty of insults at it ;D But i am pleased you enjoyed it thus far :D

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