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Review:Salem says:
Agnes here with your review.

I was reading over this chapter, and I didn't seem to catch any grammatical errors that particularly stood out. I did catch a spelling error, however:

"No peaking"-- 'peaking' should be spelled as 'peeking' here.

As for the dialogue, I think it was fine. The little conversational exchange between Tom and Dom (oh wow their names rhyme--was that intentional or accidental?) didn't seem hard to understand, not to me at least.

I like how most of the chapter was all a dream! Poor Tom. How devastating.

"She's probably going to slap me or something. I hope she doesn't, she's good at slapping faces."--was probably my favorite line in the chapter.

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