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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
Oh. You've reduced my thinking capabilities to one word. I apologize, I will try to compose myself so I can write you a decent review but if it's terrible, you should just know you blew me away with this story. I can see now why you've been nominated for a Dobby for at least one of your stories - I can't quite remember if there were more nominations than just for Glass. You write beautifully - poetically without being too flowery. Everything just flows so well together like reading liquid thoughts.

Your characterization of Sirius here is wonderful. It's nice to see him so serious and mourning the love of his life. His thoughts on the Order were spectacular and something not a lot of writers will pick up on. That they are willing to fight but they're still children, really, and they don't fully understand what fighting in this war really means. I really like that you drove that home in this story.

I don't read many Marlene stories and therefore, not a lot of Sirius/Marlene fics and aside from the fact that my OTP is Remus/Sirius, I enjoyed reading this pairing and found it worked well. His descriptions of Marlene were gorgeous and really brought her to life for me. I felt heartbreak when Sirius commented on the fact that all of these people died for this cause and nothing was left of them except their names, and the memories left behind by those who loved them.

James trying to tell Sirius that she wasn't coming back - that broke my heart even more. I love their friendship and in only one short flashback, you showed it well...that Sirius was willing to cry in front of him. A man in mourning, indeed. Poor Sirius. :(

I liked the flashbacks, I think they broke up the rest of the narrative well without seeming to be too over-the-top.

Just, really wonderful story. Well-written and the characterization was fantastic. Adding this to my favorites' list, for sure!

Author's Response: thank you so much!

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