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Review:foreverfleur says:
I have to say I was immediately attracted to this story because it was written from Narcissa's point of view. I'm going through a Narcissa phase for some reason and am completely fascinated by her backstory and perspective. So, first things first, thanks for doing something out of the ordinary--you (inadvertently) indulged my current obsession!

Secondly--I have to say that I really enjoyed this little snapshot into her married life; and, though I would never have pegged Lucius to be one to cheat on Narcissa, I thought your characterizations were relatively spot on. Especially, in keeping with the theme of my review, with regards to Narcissa.

Her reaction to Lucius's secrets whether it was the cheating or the dark mark--I think was just right. That she would put family first, her child first is a really important thread that you illustrated really well.

The interesting thing I've always felt about Narcissa is her loyalty to her family comes first. That is what defines her more than any allegiance to the Dark Arts and that in the end is what makes her redeemable. I feel like you really brought that out.

So, moral of that ramble, if its understandable haha--really nice job! I enjoyed the read! I'd love to see a longer fic in Narcissa PoV at some point!

Author's Response: Hi!! Well I don't want to sound pompous but I think I do write narcissa fairly well - and it is only because I find her character so interesting and explore-able. She is one of my favorite characters, and I love it when I meet people who share my interest for her (even if it is just a phase). =D
Anyway let me come back to the point, thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am really glad that you found this little piece good enough - with the characterizations and plot and the reality of the thing.
I am flattered that you found this so good. Thank you once again for making me smile with your encouraging review!


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