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Review:faerieall says:
I really liked this piece! It provided an angle on Ted and Andromeda's relationship we've never seen before. The fact that Ted is one of those people whose always looking from afar is lovely, as I think the majority of people are those that do look from afar. I also like Andromeda, she is gentler than her sister but certainly a Slytherin and someone to be reckoned with.

I also really liked Ted's internal monologue before he reaches the branches. It's very realistic of a teenager, I would think. His friends are also great, the bit where Crispin tells Ted to put her in his "spank bank" is another great, realistic line. You manage to combine a lovely writing style with a good story and dialogue. Well done!

Author's Response: I've always been quite interested in how their relationship started and the idea of them meeting in class was a bit cliché, I felt. Also, Ted got Andromeda - they're so different I kind of wanted to find a reason for why he would have gone after someone like her, rather than someone more... accessible. Plus, Andy's awesome :P

Thanks for leaving the review! I'm glad you liked it!
Aph xx

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