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Review:veracity says:
Okay so whenever I see that you updated, I'm like: Ohmygod yes this story is why I breathe / "Oh hey Mom... why am I grinning like an idiot? Oh, no reason..." / HOORAY!
And then I read the chapter and I'm all like: HOLY HIPPOGRIFFS THAT WAS AMAZING AND AGGY IS SUCH A SPAZ BUT I LOVE HER AND JAMES POTTER OMG OMG.
And then two days later... I'm like: Wish I could write like Zoey... / Why is James Potter not real and why is he not my boyfriend? / CAN'T BREATHE NEED MORE CLASH IMMEDIATELY.

So yeah, anyhow, this chapter is my second favorite ever. Explode is my favorite, but trust me, this is a really close second. I really thought Nora was dead (gee, am I original or what?) but I'm really glad that she isn't. I think that if she were dead it would have been to easy for us readers to pass her off as just a memory or someone from James' past, instead us seeing her as a real person who James cares about and probably still loves. The fact that she's still alive means that she could really end up dictating whether or not Aggy and James end up together (although I feel like they will in the end, but that could just be my wishful thinking at work).
It's so sad because I feel like Aggy kind of becomes a bit of an outsider in this chapter. Outsider probably isn't the best word, but I just feel like everyone in her group of friends knew about Nora except her and she probably had the most right to know anyway. I'm not saying that I'm mad at James in this chapter, because he is clearly going through a lot as well. I think that adding in the whole Nora story was brilliant because it really shows that James is a person too and even though he always seems to be collected, he's really not. He has his own story, but we never really knew about it because we only really saw him through his interactions in Aggy's story.

So, brilliant as always and I cannot wait for the next chapter!

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