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Review:Singularity says:
This is really brilliant. Ron is a complete prat for leaving, but this story makes me want to give him a hug. :*

I think you captured his character perfectly. Ron has a definite inferiority complex. I mean, he's got five awesome older brothers who he is always trying to live up to. Then he goes and makes friends with the boy who lived and the brightest witch at Hogwarts. It's kind of easy to see where these feelings come from.

I like that even at his most disloyal, Ron is still loyal to his friends. He keeps their secrets and refuses to talk about anything. I think that says a lot about his character.

You stopped in the perfect spot as well, so major points for that!

I love pretty much everything about this story. Ron's one of my favorite characters to read (and write) in fanfiction, and you did amazing with him. Thanks for sharing!

~Singularity

Author's Response: Hi, thank you so much for your review :)

Yeah, I got that from Ron too. It's easy to see why he feels inadequate. In the book it mentions briefly how Ron tried to make his way back to Hermione and Harry and I thought guilt and regret would have driven him to do that so I played on that a little.

I'm so glad that someone who loves Ron enjoyed this and thought his character was believable, that really means a lot to me. So, thank you :)

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