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Review:Jade says:
"Your mum still has no idea where the baby pictures went.”

“I, personally, suspect the nargles,” Ron told her. - BEST ONE LINER EVER!

Have you ever failed to write a good story? I'm starting to think that your writing skills are invincible, how can they all be this amazing?

I think that I would be just as frustrated as Ron was if I proposed to someone and they didn't even shed a single tear. I mean I know some people aren't good at showing emotion, but come on! Marriage is huge! I know I'd cry if someone proposed to me and I think the fact that it was so sort of out of the blue makes it even better, the shock would be enough to make me cry on it's own. I think the simplicity of his first proposal was perfect. So yeah, Hermione's reaction frustrated me just as much as it did Ron. My frustration is a credit to your writing skills.

Now her reaction at the end was absolutely brilliant, just right and like I've said with your other fics, so Hermione-ish. To me, your Hermione is like the real Hermione. Everthing you write in my opinion is just a continuation of the HP series. That's why it's so great. Eternal loyalty, remember? Keep writing.

Author's Response: I LOVE THAT LINE TOO! I think that's one of my favorites, it always gets me to snicker.

I've had a few ideas for novel(lla) lengths that I haven't gone through with that, but I don't know if I've necessarily failed writing something. A couple of chapters of Sleepless have me thinking they suck and then other people read them and are like "AHHH THAT WAS AMAZING!" So I guess that's how I'd answer that question...

Yeah, well, there would be no fic if Hermione didn't cry. And that is why this is not a Head Canon story for me- I really doubt this would happen. I think she'd cry.

ETERNAL LOYALTY! I think you should sign all your reviews 'eternal loyalty'. It makes me so happy and sad simultaneously. ~writergirl8

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