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Review:Salem says:
Agnes from the forums, reporting and reviewing!

I just want to say, first and foremost, that I love the summary you chose for this one-shot. Magical flaming forks is just so randomly hilarious!

Now, what really caught my interest was--Teddy, a Slytherin? Wow. Never would have thought of that! Especially since his mother was a Hufflepuff and his father was a Gryffindor. I like that, though. I like it a lot. I also like how you made his abilities uncontrollable. Tonks always made it seem so easy, being a Metamorphmagus, but I figure that took a lot of time to get the hang of. Very interesting.

As for your concerns: I wasn't expecting it to be any less fluffy, as fluff is one of its genres, but I don't think it was unbearably so. Had a good balance of fluff, romance and humor, I think. It was very enjoyable, overall! I liked the recurring theme of Teddy's pink eyes and how they related to his feelings for Victoire. Very sweet! Characters were also pretty enjoyable overall--expect for Prang. I really don't like him. He seemed too stereotypical jock, in my opinion, but I figure you were trying to make him as unlikable as possible--if so, then congratulations, you succeeded! Teddy's characterization was very nice, and I think it was my favorite. The way you wrote him was part serious, part humorous, and part sweet--a perfect balance. Victoire, on the other hand--I like how you wrote her out as a strong type who wouldn't stand for a boy possessively hanging off of her like Simon did. I think she really could have handled herself even if Teddy didn't come to her rescue!

Author's Response: Hi! Wow, thank you so much! Thanks for commenting on the amount of fluff, it's good to know that it's not too unbearable xD As for Prang, I wanted to make him more snooty (being the son of Ernie Prang) so I'll try and make him less stereotypical :) Thanks for commenting on him! And thank you for reviewing!

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