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Review:Cate says:
This chapter was amazing! I don't even know where to start.

The argument in the Great Hall had me rolling! It was great to see that Remus is keeping up with Ivy's sense of humor. She just keeps pushing him though, so it was bound to happen. McGonagall playing a joke on them was hilarious. I like the way her character is portrayed. Strict, but when she does play a joke, it's a great one. I actually know people like that and it always takes me by surprise when they come out with something outrageously funny.

I was really bummed when Ivy asked Ryden out! I was like, "What are you doing!? NO! Stop that!"

I've said it before, but I really like the way that you write all of the characters. There are so many characters in this story and you manage to give them all unique characteristics and personalities. I always think it's very complex and difficult to pull off, but you do it phenomenally! :)

And I'm sorry I'm posting this belatedly. I've been swamped with my courses. I've basically had no life this week.

Author's Response: hahaha, yeah, i figured it was about time that remus finally accepted ivy's challenge, and attempted to make a bigger fool of her than she could of him. that sentence makes no sense. *shrug*
=D i love mcgonagall. she's probably my favorite character. she's such a bad-you-know-what.
i'm really loving the reactions to ivy asking ryden out. lol, i can just imagine all of you sitting there yelling at your screens as you read in helpless horror. *happy sigh* (as twisted as that sounds, i'm actually ecstatic that you guys are furious with ivy. XD)
thanks so much. you're too kind. i just like to get into each character's head. different perspectives are so unpredictable and fun!
it's alright; i totally understand. with school just starting back up, i really meant to get this chapter to you guys much sooner. i'm just happy that you're reviewing!
~ally


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