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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
Hi there, living.free from TGS here to review as requested. I thought you did a good job keeping up with the relationship and dialogue between Teddy and Lily. I'm not much for this pair, just doesn't do much for me, but I could feel the love growing and vanishing between the two of them as the story progressed. There were some grammar mistakes in this, so another read through to edit those out would definitely help. Or you could have someone else, a friend perhaps, go through and beta it for you. Over all, though, this was a great first chapter.

Author's Response: Hi Leslie! Yeah, I wanted to try a lesser known next gen relationship and was originally planning on making this Teddy/Rose but decided to try Teddy/Lily instead. I'm so glad you could actually feel the shift in the emotions throughout this - I always struggle with making my relationships believable, so it's awesome that you felt that! And oh dear, I'll be sure to go back and check those! Thanks so much for the wonderful feedback!

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