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Review:Giola says:
Hey!

Wow, this is such a unique piece! I had no idea what to expect going into this, but I loved it :) Writing about an inanimate object per say is something that scares a lot of people, and I commend you for doing it. You have a really good grasp on description here, something you need for this type of writing.

For something with no characters or ships, this was beautiful. I could see the 14 students in my mind, and the pitch's take on it all was so sad, it was heartbreaking.

9/10 for a few very minor grammar issues :)

-Giola

Author's Response: Hello my dear ^_^ thank you soo much for reviewing this ^_^ It mean alot too me,

I have been alerted about the grammar issues and am about to run it through a processor again ^_^ scary thought that really isn't it? Putting it through a processor? O.o

It was a struggle to write, i'm not going to lie :/ but thank you for your amazing review ^_^ I'm glad you liked it :D x


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