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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
Wow. This is creepier than half the books categorized as horror out there. I'm still in shock here of how well you wrote this. Could it be any better? The first paragraph was so sweet, yet so sinister at the same time. The way you compared her to candy made it seem like she was a little angel, yet there was something heavier in the words as well. And then you get into the next paragraph, and it starts toying with your mind. It wasn't the kind of horror that makes you jump up and scream, but the kind of horror that makes you paranoid and disturbed. To me, the latter is much harder to pull off and much better to read. It was absolutely perfect! Great job on this!
(By the way, HOMG GORGEOUS BANNER *eats*)

Author's Response: I wanted to convey Dom's innocence, which is one of the traits that drew Teddy in especially. I'm really glad I was able to get that across and do it well ^__^

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