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Review:scarlettandgold says:
Hello! I'm here with your requested review.
Before I start, I must say, this is the first Peter story I've ever read and I'm so glad I did read it!
At the very beginning, I fell in love with the very simple voice you gave Peter. His thoughts are scatty and not very complex and yet he thinks very carefully through the biggest decision of his life. His train of thought made a lot of sense - we can see what it may have been like for him in that very moment, in front of Voldemort, surrounded by all these people he had feared for all these years.
I also was really impressed by how at the beginning, you feel sort of bad for Peter. He's all alone, his friends are all gone, drinking at a bar by himself, the sort of unimpressive young adult who's lost direction in his life. Just as we kind of see his side, he makes the decision to betray his best friends, we see the side of him we saw in the novels. However, we do feel a lot more for him than before. It was very artfully done!
I also like the friendship dynamic he describes at the beginning. He's sort of doubtful of his own self-worth but at the same time he does realize his friends love him dearly and he loves them in return. It helps the reader see him as more of a real person rather than just "the betrayer"
One thing I did notice, however, was that in the middle you switched to present tense rather than past tense like the rest of it. This ruins the flow of the narrative a bit.
Other than that, this story was a lovely read! You've given this a lot of depth and thought and really made me as a reader revaluate my thoughts on Peter. Wonderful job!

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