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Review:Woodrow Rynne says:
Hey, :)

This is a really nice story you got there. I loved the way you stole the missing moment in DH and described everyone's reactions. Your summary is really, really powerful and that is what drew me to this :). The characterisation was really great too! :)

A few problems I had with this, though. The emotions and the inner thoughts you conveyed weren't exactly hard-hitting for me. Of course, that might just have been a personal preference, but I still found them a li'l off. I mean saying 'Ginny's heart sank' seems like an understatement of sorts. I mean, shouldn't she have been shocked and even more pained to know that Harry had walked to his own death? And Ron saying continuously that Harry was his brother seemed a little formal and soap- operaish to me.

Sorry, if that came out as a little harsh, but I do like this a lot apart from that, and I do applaud you for your creativity. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing.

I always think that I stink at summaries, so I'm glad that you thought this one was good, and it made you want to read the story. I'm also glad that you liked the idea of the story and thought the characterization was mostly good.

I don't think you sounded harsh, and I appreciate your honesty. I'll look back through the story, especially at those bits and see if there's something I could do to make it a little more realistic.

Thanks again for your review :)

~Singularity


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