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Review:Singularity says:
This was really beautiful. I like that you chose to write about Colin. He's one of those great background characters that Jo created, but that we don't get to see a whole lot of, especially as the books progress.

Although this was written specifically about Colin, I think it is such a great universal story. It's like, when you hear about a soldier who was killed in battle, you stop and think, "That's too bad," and then you move on. But to that person's family, it's a complete tragedy. Their lives are completely changed forever, even though the rest of the world keeps on. That's really powerful.

This story was very simplistic, and I think that was a perfect choice. I love the details you put in. I don't know why, but the part that really stuck out to me was: "he had a brother who refused to ever again touch a camera". That really struck me for some reason. It was absolutely heart-wrenching.

I really liked this story. Great job.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review! I'm so glad you liked it. I agree about Colin, but at least it gave me more freedom to create his own story.

I'm glad you liked that it was simple- I chose to go that route to help convey the strength of his death by itself.

Thanks so much once again for reviewing!

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