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Review:electricfeel says:
This was absolutely brilliant. Truly. It was bittersweet and you captured the grief of George brilliantly. I think what I liked most about this, however, was Ron's handling of the situation. I think you were spot on in his characterisation. I can imagine Ron reacting exactly like this.

I also feel you managed to capture the rapport between the two brothers, even in their grief. It was very endearing and heartwarming, despite the tragedy of the subject matter.

"Ron knew how to handle Harry because, when he thought about it, they were basically two different halves that made up a whole person. Ron was just starting to tread into the murky waters of handling Hermione, and there were plenty of mishaps that proved he didn't have his bearings."

For some reason, I really liked this part. I think it was because I was partial to the little mentions of Hermione. Overall, though, the real strength in this one-shot was how realistic it was. I mean this in terms of the characterisation, the grief, the realities of the aftermath of the war, etc.

Fantastic writing :)

Author's Response: Goodness, I'm sorry it has taken me so long to reply to. Especially because you were so kind! I'm glad that the emotions I tried to get across were effective. Ron is one of those characters I'm never quite sure if I'm doing him right, so him being characterized well was really great to hear.

That's one of my favorite passages in the story too.

Thanks so much for your review! I appreciate it a lot!

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