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Review:marinahill says:
All your stories are so original! It's such a pleasure to read your work - I never know quite what to expect, but you've once again astounded me.

Trelawney is another of those unappreciated minor characters with plenty of back-story to offer inspiration for any writer. You've fleshed her out here, showing how much of a burden her gifts are to her. I think if I were her I'd also have trouble coming to terms with a lot of the things she sees.

Your language is so easy to read - your vocabulary isn't over-flashy and the word choice is perfectly subtle. I'm not thinking about how you formulate the sentences but what they're actually saying to me. It's very easy to get lost in your writing, something I really appreciate. There's nothing clunky about it at all. The fact that you can write so beautifully whilst tackling a difficult character like Trelawney impresses me, I really loved it!

Another stunning piece!

Marina

Author's Response: Hi Marina, thank you very much for saying that my writing is original, I really do appreciate that, that's very kind of you to say :)

Your review is so lovely, thank you very much. I'm delighted you enjoyed it so much :) Bobby xx


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