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Review:ravenclaw_princess says:
Powerful was the first word that came to mind after finishing this story. It really left me feeling emotionally drained as I traveled through Rose's longing, insecurities and self destruction. She may believe she is taking control of her own life, but as the last paragraph said, the act proved herself cold and heartless.

I'm envious of your descriptive talents. The whole story was so beautifully crafted and your use of descriptions and metaphors was so amazing that it really transported me to the night and I felt like I was watching her destroy herself as well as someone else. They all flowed very effortlessly as well and wove such a atmosphere in which the story came to life. There was one sentence though which I really didn't get, maybe it's just me, but it's this one. "The pretence remains, the mask professional and perfect at time when she is in the company of others."

Rose was beautiful, so flawed, so determined, so over run with an insatiable lust that consumed her, leading her to do the unthinkable...selfish girl. Her emotions came through so strongly as well as her motivations. I love the foreshadowing also, I think it added even more powerfully to the wrongness of her actions.

Grammar and spelling were wonderful, flow and pace were perfect. This story is simply breath taking.

Author's Response: Thank you! I have to say, this is one of my favourites that I've written. Maybe I'm biased because it's my favourite ship, but I'm proud of this. You're right - Rose is being selfish and it was nice to explore a new side of her :) thanks for the review!

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