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Review:marinahill says:
This was superb! I love a well-written Founders story, and this was just that. You transported me to another time, and I really got a feel for the era this was set in. The dialogue really made it for me; it was so in-keeping with that era that it just made the whole chapter more vivid and more real in my mind.

You didn't go over-board with flowery descriptions, yet I could imagine everything so well just from the simple imagery. I was curious at first to know who Eldritch was, as he seemed to bring out a really competitive streak in her, and the two seemed to have a really strong friendship and perhaps a slight rivalry. I think you captured the essence of Rowena perfectly.

I hope you update soon :)

- Marina

Author's Response: Hi Marina, thanks very much for your review and kind words, much appreciated! I'm very happy to hear that you thought it flowed nicely and you liked the description and characterisation. Hearing that you think I did the dialogue of the time justice is also lovely, thank you. Much appreciated, I hope you enjoy the following chapters as much as this! :) Bobby xx

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