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Review:Celestie says:
Eee, and it's over! And I shall miss the absolute joy that is this adorable story.

So, Lumina...dies?! D: She dies, but she actually isn't Mrs. Lovegood, right? Because there's a line that says Xeno also lost his wife. Seriously, that's so depressing and sad that he lost two women he loved. But at least he got Luna. Which, I suppose doesn't actually make Pomona an aunt. A pity :P

This's a lovely story, the parts about Gilderoy losing his memory were sweet yet funny and I totally shipped Glideroy/Pomona for a bit before I remembered what an unbearable idiot he is in canon and she deserves better.

On the whole, this short story collection has been very cute, very realistic and lovely to read. I hope you write more on minor characters, Lily. You give insight to them and do them complete justice.

Author's Response: HEEE HEEE the end! It took me long enough ><

Yes--she dies. And no, she isn't Mrs. Lovegood. I wanted to get a little into Xeno's psychology--I know there's a love that you have for a child that would force you to sacrifice Harry Potter to get her back, but it has to be a /special/ kind of desperation, to turn in the savior of humanity, when you believe he is that. It seems fitting, that he'd lost /so much/ that Luna was literally the only person he cared for enough to put the whole world at stake.

Hahah, I sometimes forget Gilderoy is actually insufferable, too, but I guess that helps me get into Po's mindset :) I loved reading him in the second book, and I became fascinated with him--there aren't many people who can get to be that way without having a notable past, in this case, his severe lack of spotlight as a child and his previously-present insecurities.

Thank you so much for reading this collection--I enjoy writing minor characters for, I guess, the same reason that I like Next Gen--you have the basics, but the rest of their world is, as it were, entirely up to you :)

MUCHOS LOVE (H)

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