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Review:electricfeel says:
Hi, electricfeel here from the forums with your review :)

This was another great chapter. Your characterisation is very believable which I think is a real strong point in your writing here. The relationships between each of the marauders as well as their relationship with your own OC all seems very plausible. I even found the way the characters interacted with one another very well written.

The plot seems to be coming along nicely. Although there's not much plot development within this chapter, instead we are getting a more detailed insight into the characters and their feelings and relationships, which is always great. It's a good pace to go at. Your writing has such an easy and enjoyable flow too.

I really can't stress enough how much I think your characterisation is spot on though. I think that's what makes this story brilliant. It's what allows your story to stand out from the others. You certainly have a very strong opening few chapters. I'm really intrigued by this plotline now and how it will all end.

Hope this review helped, and feel free to request again :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for being willing to come back, it means a good deal to me that you agreed. :D I work very hard on trying to get everyone as canon as possible and the fact that you appreciate it as you do makes me very, very happy. :3

I'll certainly drop by once again when you have a slot, your reviews are wonderful and I really, really thank you for them.

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