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Review:Everlasting Faerie Light says:
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Wow. I found this fic to be extremely powerful. It's gripping and simple, yet complex at the same time. I love how you can feel Ginny's conflicting emotions about Snape and how you can sympathize with her. Yes, she wants to agree with her boyfriend/husband, but she has her own conflicts and vendettas against Snape. He was the one that she was struggling against for the main part of the war. This makes everything very believable because alot of people who read the Harry Potter books automatically look at Snape as an immediate hero, bur really...he's done a lot of bad things and he's definitely no angel. I also love how you used the quote in your story. It's very strong and it sent chills up my spine. I can just imagine her saying that when I read this. this is very emotionally intense and very prominent in its pace and in the language you used, especially the ending...where you show the noble Gryffindor part of Ginny by having her stand up for Snape in the end, not because she thought he was a hero...but because it is the right thing to do. In just a one chapter, you've made Ginny a strong character while justifying Snape at the same time. The text flow is very well done, making it easy to read. The only problem I have is the part when Ginny goes in to see the memories of Lily. The descriptions waned a bit and seemed a bit rushed. However, Ginny's emotional response to them were very good and added to the story. So all in all, I favorited this fic because I believe it to be a very engaging and powerful one-shot. You've successfully taken the quote and made a very strong story with chilling dialogue and strong characters. I'm impressed. Well done :D.

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for this, I'm honoured you liked it so much.

You really understood what I was doing here, with Ginny being brave and doing the "right" thing, questioning ALL of our perceptions of snape, Ginnys character.

I actually agree with you about the descriptions. I wanted them to be abstract but i think they did take away from the story. I've sent in an edited version so hopefully this will be all corrected :D

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