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Review:MajiKat says:
okay here i am, reviewing out of order, lol.

a re-vision is correct, because this is so much more than a rewriting! this is pure genius and i love it so much. i actually read this chapter ages ago and it has taken me so long to post a review on this.

i adore the characterisation and the way you have opened this Act. it is ambiguous and abstract and i really like that, as you know.

there isn't too much more i can say - i think i said/gushed it all out in the review for chapter 2, only that this chess game - brilliant and what a perfect introduction to your world and your characters.

Kate xx

Author's Response: I wonder if the story doesn't make more sense backwards. XD I came up with it in the wrong direction - from the ending to the beginning, then the middle. With the source text, the ending is the showpiece, and I want mine to be the same way - won't say anything more on that, thought. ;)

It's fantastic to hear that you like how this story is turning out so far and it means a lot to receive such compliments from you! ^_^

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