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Review:electricfeel says:
Hi, electricfeel here from the forums with your review. Sorry for the delay in getting this to you, my internet was down for a while.

Anyways, I think this is a really interesting premise for a story. I don't think I've come across a story where the marauders go forward in time, it's something different and that's always a good thing!

I think the story flowed fine and your characterisation seems good too. I noticed a few little grammar errors but they weren't so huge that they distracted me from the actual story, just small ones that you might catch yourself if you give the chapter a little read over.

But, overall, it's a promising start! Hope this review helped :)

Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review! I enjoyed reading it!

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