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Review:rich_blonde marauder23 says:
Hellooo! :)

So, the first thought I had when I started to read this was: "Grrr, Victoire pisses me off." Because, well, let's face it- I'm sure she pisses pretty much everyone off.

And THEN I was like WOAH because of all the metaphors and all the angst and drama and darkness. It was intense, to say the least. But you really captured their emotions well, and I thought that was great.

I liked how you based this story off of Teddy coming to her, running to her, and how you added memories and other images to that. It was fantastic!

At first I thought Teddy was going to Azkaban to save her, but, I dunno anymore! It was all so confusing. Was he going to kill her? Teddy hated her, yet loved her.

I'm happy Victoire apparently changed in the end, but she still KILLED HIM! I mean, what a crazy woman! What is UP with her? She is definitely one crazy girl. I didn't exactly like her for that too- she lured Teddy in and then used him. Ugh.

This story was very dark, and I really liked that you kept it that way until the end.

All in all, amazing story and characterization!

Oh, and one question. Is Victoire a VAMPIRE? Because he kept on saying how she had blood on her lips and how she was always the predator. I dunno, maybe that's just me. Is Victoire just plain crazy? Cause she still murdered him in the end, and he let her! HE LET HER. Freaking crazy people.

10/10

xxx sofia! :)

PS Is Victoire's family dead or something? Because she kept on saying something about going to them, coming back to be an angel with them. I dunno anymore!

Author's Response: Victoire IS one of those 'grrr' characters I think, but that's only when I read her in fics where she magically appears in Teddy's bed after a heavy night of drinking or when she's pregnant with her babies. I always have this fascination with people you are perfect and beautiful - like they need to be dirtied or ruined in order for them to face the world.

In this one, Victoire is just psycho, really. So is Teddy, a little bit, because he fell in love with it.

This is pretty intense, yeah. The style is the most different thing I've ever tried - it's second person present tense, which is such a challenge to write.

TEDDY'S COMING TO GET YOU. To be honest, I wouldn't mind in the slightest...

At first, yeah, he was coming to hurt/kill her. She'd betrayed him and killed her other lover, so he was pretteh angreh. He loved her, yes, which gave him the power and the determination, as well as his werewolf-ish tendencies, to get that far and also swim to Azkaban. Who does that? Teddy does.

She changed. He changed her into a werewolf thing, like him, so he fell in love with her all over again because they were finally on the same level. But then.. dun dun dun... she rearranged the power struggle so she was back on top of it. Superior, and al that.

No, Victoire is not a vampire. Too much like Twilight then, what with Teddy being temperature hot and physically hot and a werewolf who is related to the Blacks... ?? She's just psycho, really/

THANKS FOR THE LOVELY COMMENTS. YOU MADE MY DAY! THANKS FOR READING AND REVIEWING!

P.S. No, they aren't dead. She thinks she's more beautiful than them, so she's an 'angel' and wants to return to heaven where 'she belongs'. She cray.


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