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Review:Phoenix_Flames says:
Another great chapter!

I think your entrances into the chapters are just brilliant. You always start it off very well with James' emotions and descriptions of the day and how the family is going, etc. It's really great.

He is so open with us and that develops his character wonderfully. And it's also the way you write him that just develops the story so much better. It adds so much life to it, humor, and personality. When he jumps the last four steps, it's great. It shows how deep into the story you go. It's clever that you can add things like this and shows your talent as a writer. It also shows James' personality. Wonderful! :)

And as for the plot of this chapter! Really wonderful. Again, you just have a way of writing the Potters and showing their unity through it all. They really shout family to me. Absolutely great. :)

I love your older Harry. I think a lot of authors have a really hard time writing him after the war because he could really change so much after the war, and we just don't know. So many people easily say he's out of character or something, but I love him here. He's so happy, something I think he is entitled to be 100% of the time after the war. He is brilliant.

A wonderful story! Thank you for requesting. Feel free to come request the next chapter when it's up! :)

Author's Response: Aww your review made me smile so much! Actually, I was grinning. You are way too sweet with your reviews and the compliments are wonderful.

I'm so pleased that you liked this chapter as well and you liked the introduction. I always have a hard time with them, but this is the only story that I actually am pleased with all the introductions.

Older Harry was really hard to write, but in the end, I just let the words flow. I think that Harry would be definitely a caring father. I can definitely see him as a dad which makes it easy for me to write him.

Thanks for taking the time to review! Your rock! :)


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