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Review:Phoenix_Flames says:
Hello there! And back for the next chapter. :)

This was lovely! Just like the first. The humor was just fantastic. I don't know where you come up with it or how, but it's great. It just sinks into every part of the chapter and gives it so much life. It feels so real and as if it is jumping out of the screen with all of the humor. I like to think that the Potter house could go something like this after the war. Harry and Ginny's kids are just brilliant.

I know this chapter is titled family feud, but I was just laughing at it the entire time. The way you wrote it made it all enjoyable and I had a smile on my face the entire time. I felt like it was one of those times with the friendly arguments that, while you are actually arguing, it only makes their bond stronger. And that's what I felt here. They were all so connected like a wonderful family.

Super great job with that! I loved your mention of Ginny and her potential 50 boyfriends. That was hilarious and I love how you added that to the story. You know, Ginny did actually have a lot of boyfriends it seems during her days at Hogwarts, and I had never seen that fact played out in a fanfic before. I loved that change! Great job!

So the plot is coming along nicely, as are your characters. They are all wonderful and just click as a family without really trying even. That's brilliant!

Your actual flow of the story is going brilliantly too. You don 't take too much time to introduce characters or develop their traits and all that, etc. You use the plot to develop them, and never at one point do you overwhelm us with too much of something. You have spaced out the descriptions, emotions, actions, and dialogue just perfectly. There is a brilliant flow between everything.

Really great second chapter! I can't wait for the third. THank you for coming and requesting again! :)

Author's Response: Oh my, you have got to be one of my favourite reviewers!

Seriously, it's so amazing to see the detail and effort you put into your reviews. They make me smile and the entire time, while I was reading your review I had a smile on my face.

I am so glad that you really like the chapter. I was so afraid that the story wouldn't be humorous and my writing would be dull but I'm glad that it isn't.

I really like the fact that the Potters are a family. They're close and that's how I always imagined them. I could really see Harry and Ginny as parents and I think they would have a very close family.

The fact that they argue and feud with each other only brings them closer and I am very pleased that you thought the same thing!

Yay! You like the flow as well. I like letting the characters play out and even though I have their characterizations in my head, I like them to be able to develop a bit through the plot so I'm glad you like that.

Thanks you SO much for the review! It was greatly appreciated. You are a wonderful reviewer!


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