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Review:Phoenix_Flames says:
Hi there! I'm here with your review as requested! :)

And holy cow! This piece was absolutely amazing. I am so glad you requested. This piece has absolutely fascinated me and mesmerized me. I see that you just want a general review, so I'm just going to give you my thoughts and all the things that were going through my mind. :)

I love how you started the piece out with those three simple sentences. They were gripping and enthralling. Just from then you had me captivated with the story and I had to know why Rose was dying. And just a random thought in my mind. Is Nymphadora really Roses's middle name? I don't know if it is, but if it isn't, I think you picked a perfect middle name for her. That's wonderful and such a sweet gesture to remember Tonks by. :) So I loved that.

I always tend to love pieces that focus on one character looking back at their life and their future in a way. I also love it when a piece has no dialogue. It just focuses so much more on the story at hand and the emotions. I've always felt like it conveys the story so much better. And in this piece, really the only dialogue was with the veins asking if it was the end, so it's easy to still consider this with no dialogue. :)

This was just absolutely beautiful. The way you wrote it was fascinating. It was gripping and moving. I nearly cried. Honestly. :) And I loved that you made Rose's sickness a muggle one. There aren't many fics on HPFF that have to do with muggle sicknesses. Actually, I feel like most authors don't consider the fact that wizards get sick too and it's all the same as muggles, and that they aren't immune to the muggle sicknesses. So I loved that the cause of Rose's impending death is due to cancer. Loved that.

And when Rose went on about being at St. Hope's hospital, I felt her pain and her emotion. You put some of her personality into all of it when she said "of nowhere." Just with something small like that you could feel her upset and her pain. There were so many other parts like this throughout the piece when I felt this way just by your word choice and descriptions.

This was beautiful and absolutely moving. It was so original and just fantastic. I have favorites this. :)

Thank you so much for requesting! I know I just kind of went on and on about the things I loved, but I can't really think of anything I didn't. So I do hope you find this review helpful in some way! :)

Thank you for introducing me to this piece! :)

Author's Response: Ooh, thankyou so much for this amazing review! It's given me so much inspiration and strength to go on :)

I'm glad you like the start - I wasn't sure if it was a bit of a put-off or not! And I always imagined that Rose's middle name would be Nymphadora 'cause Tonks seemed to get left out of it all somehow with the naming business.

I always love really emotional pieces too, and at first it was hard to write, but I just got so into it! And it's because you never see muggle illnesses much that I wanted to write this - wizards are human too, and they wouldn't automatically be immune to it all.

Ohh thankyou about the hospital :) I couldn't stop writing her, and I'm glad you can feel her emotion too. And thankyou so much for this amazing review!


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