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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
Hello! This story was great!

I really liked the way you portayed the Dursleys in this. I think you got the characterization of them spot on. Dudley was appropriately whiney and spoiled, Petunia was perfectly fussy, and Vernon was just Vernon, because there's really no words to describe him :P But this was really believable, and it fit the challenge perfectly!

If I had any critique for you at all, it'd be the grammar, and flow. The grammar was slightly off at times, which made it difficult to read (but just barely). And the flow was only interrupted once, I thought, when you were talking about his surprise. I had to read that part twice to get it. But these are both minor things, so don't worry too much about them!

Overall, this was a great representation of the challenge, along with an adorable story! Winners will be posted later today, so keep an eye out for them ;)
-Naida

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am having it beta'd at the moment, so those mistakes will hopefully be ironed out, but I didn't have enough time to have it beta'd before posting it, if I wanted to enter it in the challenge :P

And thank you again for the result!
I loved the challenge, well done.

- Megan xo


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