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Review:AC_rules says:
Waheey! There's a story of yours that I haven't reviewed yet, so... why not review, right?

I loved the way you used language in this. The description was all really good and everything just seemed to flow really naturally. There were no awkward pauses or anything it all just fit.

I didn't like seeing Ginny so upset but it was understandable. I thought the letter bit was really good - its the sort of thing I'd do when I was really upset and especially the bit when she starts forcing hersef to smile. Ginny is a pretty strong character so it makes sense that she'd push herself forwards a little bit.

I'm always a little bit in awe about people who can keep characters who are written about loads in cannon, in character. I'd never be able to write about Harry or Ginny or Ron or any of thoes. They're too formed. I'd be really scared of getting them all wrong. So well done!

Ac xxx

Author's Response: lol, YOU FOUND SOMETHING!

*hides* My first story. I don't even know why I still keep it up :P You really are too sweet, you know. Thanks for the ego boost! Not that I needed another one from you xD I'm really glad that Ginny was canon though, and that you liked the language. I absolutely adore getting reviews from you! I think i'll go reserruct my muse and write something just to get another one :P Thanks again!
-Naida


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