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Review:Phoenix_Flames says:
Hi there! I'm here from the forums with the review you requested. :)

This seems like a great story! It had a wonderful start and a very entertaining chapter. You pulled me into the story immediately and kept me quite enterained. You have a good sense of humor, and with that humor, you added a lot of life and personality to the story. It was wonderful.

You opened it brilliantly with the in-depth but not overwhelming in the least descriptions of what clears James' heads and what exactly he is going through at this point in his life. At his age, I can definitely see this as being a typical conversation one would have with their parents, and I'm glad you have included that. Just because they are the Potters doesn't mean their children will know everything and not have to have the 'talks.' :P And I love how you went about it. It was clever, and I liked James' reaction to it all. It was quite entertaining and developed his character at the same time.

There are so many different personalities for the Potter children that are so overdone, but I love your characterization of James. He was hilarious and entertaining, and he made me have a smile on my face the entire chapter. I loved it when he bombard Lily with all the ridiculous questions starting with trees all the way down to birds and their nests. Very good.

This was a great start to the story. You did well with keeping your reader entertained and wanting more. Verry well done! :)

I am going to finish up my queue, and then I will return for the next few chapters. If you don't hear from me within the next few days though, feel free to come request again. :) Thank you!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Wow, this was a long mother of a review. It's so great to see when reviewers post long reviews. It really makes me so happy! I'm blushing at all the compliments you gave! They're so sweet.

I'm glad you enoyed the chapter and that you love my characterization of James. You are a wonderful reviewer and so sweet! I was worried about keeping readers entertained so I'm glad that you think they will be!

Thanks again so much for the wonderful review!

*blushes at compliments*

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