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Review:Phoenix_Flames says:
Hi there! I'm here with your review as requested. :)

This was a great start to the story. You seem to have a very unique and original story developing here. I can't wait to see where you take it. I'm sure it will be wonderful.

You did a good job with starting the story off well and pulling the reader in from the very beginning. You had me captivated and intrigued from the start. I wanted to know more as soon as I could. Well done. Also great job with all the descriptions! You really did a wonderful job with that. You brought the story to life and gave it feeling and emotion all in one. I felt as if I were there.

I think storires told from Harry's POV are actually pretty rare because he is so difficult to write, but so far I think you have his character spot on. I can't wait to see if this will remain so as the story develops, but I'm sure you will do a great job with him. :) He seems just wonderful so far. I loved his conversation with Ginny, and I'm glad you put that in there. We know Harry is the type to bottle all of his emotions up, but I'm so glad he was about to open up. I love that change you made!

And making Alice his god-mother! Wow! You know, I always wondered if he had a god-mother. I found it odd - but completely plausible, I guess - that he didn't have a god-mother. And while thinking this, it didn't even occur to me that Alice could have been it. I think you are so clever for making her his god-mother because it could easily be true. And that note to Harry from Alice was wonderful. It was very touching.

I can't wait to see where you will take this story. I'm sure it will be wonderful.

I am going to empty out the rest of my queue. THen I will be back for more. If I'm not back within a few days, feel free to come request the next chapter. :) Thank you!

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