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Review:rich_blonde marauder23 says:

Eeee so dark :) I loved it! I really hope you win, it was really well written. There were no grammatical mistakes, and it makes it really all the better. You used very intricate descriptions and words. Mysterious, and very dark at the same time.

I loved that you based your story slightly off of Little Red Riding Hood, and that you made it as dark as it was from the brothers' Grimm's book :)

Also very well positioned scene-wise (if you catch my gist). The setting was very weary- you weren't too sure what was happening in the beginning and what would happen in the end.

You portrayed her emotions really well to us readers, and I thought that was beautiful. What Celia felt, we felt. What Celia saw, we saw. It was very well drawn out, we saw everything really cleary, even hidden in the mystery of it all.

You took a character like Fenrir Greyback and completely turned it into you're own story. I think you do minor characters like him justice, because you create a background for them, a history of some sort. It's nice to see that even minor characters aren't forgotten by you. Good for you; it was great!

You get very good story ideas, and I truly believe that you would be a great author. I would certainly read your books. You have a gift- and you use it!

I liked it, you should definitely continue!



Author's Response: Thanks! I've realised that I'm TERRIBLE at answering your reviews. YOu left me this really lovely one on some story that I planned to go respond to immedately... and I still haven't. Hopefully this will make up for it?

THANK YOU SO MUCH! This is my first attempt at writing something with the intention of being dark and, and... NO GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES! Wow, now that really IS an achievement for me :P

I'm running out of ways to say thanks but I really do appreciate when people like you read lots of my stories and leaves me reviews that keep me smiling for a long time. Its really encouraging! Especially when you say such wonderfully nice and impossible things such as 'you would be a great author'

So, thankyouthankyouthankyou! :D


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