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Review:victoriaaaxD says:
i think that your story has some good concepts, but being honest, you really need to expand EVERYTHING. chapters need to be longer, characters further developed. also, your sex confusion pregnancy plot is approaching (i know this is harsh) soap opera territory. which isn't always bad. but really, just keep it somewhat in the realm of reality.
that being said, you have a good writing style with a lot of potential and the humor in the story is really great.
good luck, i really do like the story and want you to do well.

Author's Response: back handed compliment right there...i shall return it...THANKS BITCH!

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