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Review:Phoenix_Flames says:
MARINA! I'm finally here to review this fic! I had been meaning to for so long, and it had been on my list for ages. And now I finally got to! YAY! And first off, I want to say thank you so much, you ridiculous girl, for that compliment in my review thread. :) I am no where near an expert in the area, but I will take the compliment. Thank you, and I'm glad you enjoyed my founders fic. :)

Anyways. Onto the story! :P

I thought this was a brilliant opening chapter. While not much is going on, you used the plot to cleverly set up the basis of the story and Helena's relationship with her mother. That was so clever. I love the way you have characterized them and set up the story. And Rowena's character is perfect I think! Absolutely perfect. Just when she said "No man will see my tears, Helena. They will not be privy to my weakness," it only added to her character, and I think she's just right. You've set up a brilliant basis for them to being disagreeing with one another to push Helena on the verge to steal her mother's diadem.

Your descriptions in this chapter were brilliant. I always love your descriptions. They are the most beautiful and vivid I have ever seen. You always have a way of pulling the reader into the story, and it just feels so alive and as if we're right there. Gah, beautiful descriptions! :)

This was wonderful! I can't wait to see the other characters and just how you will do this story. Absolutely wonderful!

I will be back soon for the next chapters.


Author's Response: ILY MORE, DRUE ♥

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