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Review:Houlestar says:
This is Houlestar with your requested review!

This is really good. I really liked it. I thought you characterized the Dursleys very well. It felt like it was straight out of the first book (when you got all of those great Dursley scenes). Dudley seemed just like Dudley, and Vernon was just as nasty... I loved your Petunia (she's a really fun character to write in my opinion).

I just loved the contrast between Harry's injury and Dudley's. Great job with that part. It really shows the Dursley's well.

I'm really impressed with how well you captured the spirit of this family and made this little scene that showed off the entire dynamic of Number 4. Well done!

While the story is awesome (plot wise and characterization), you might want to get a Beta to look over some grammar and typographical errors that can be easily fixed. Otherwise the story was excellent!

Thank you,
Houlestar

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the feedback! I really enjoyed portraying all of the characters :3
Yes, I haven't managed to get a beta yet, but I will do very shortly to try and iron out the errors :)
Thank you again!

- Megan xxx


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