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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Hey I think this is a good beginning to your story. I really like this era as well as dramione so this was a fun read. I like how you have it set up and the way that you wrote this chapter. Also I liked the title of your chapter I found it to be kind of funny. I didn't spot any major mistakes throughout the chapter, I think there was one instance where you had an s at the end of a word when you didnt need it- here it is- "Listen, Evans, James continued, leaning forwards in his seat.

Really though this was a good beginning it gave me a little idea of who the characters are and what they are like, maybe just expand on them a little more in the next few chapters. Also i must say I liked how you started it out in the library and such. Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, and your comments. Hopefully the characters will expand in the next couple chapters - and I double checked the forward/forwards scenario (my way is fine, apparently, but thanks for mentioning it).

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